I agree with the latest review, you have a very neat buildup at the start. Your lead sound between 20" and 40" lacks a bit of treble to me, and feels too thick or split across your stereo channels. My ears also missed a little period of rest or wavering in the middle of the track: just some space to musically breathe.
Keep it up anyway, I'm looking forward to listening to your next tracks.
It's nice, there's a slight hardstyle tone to it due to the bouncy bass/bassy kick in the last third of the track. To me, there's mostly a lack of balance in your mix that really hinders your music's potential. Get some sidechain pumping in your melody, and some transient shaping to sharpen your percussions up!
Anyway, keep going!
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